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Essay Competition 2015

TAMIU GEAR UP

Gaining Early Awareness and Readiness for Undergraduate Programs

WRITE IT! GEAR IT! LIVE IT!

Thank you to all the GEAR UP IV Students who participated in the 2015 Essay Competition WRITE IT! GEAR IT! LIVE IT! The Students winners were celebrated during an Awards Ceremony on June 20th, 2015. This year, students were invited to write about any of the following three topics:

  1. Describe a circumstance, obstacle or conflict in your life, and the skills and resources you used to resolve it. Were you successful? What lessons did you learn from this experience? How has GEAR UP IV helped you with your goals?
  2. What are Three Major ways you have contributed to your community where you have shown leadership or initiative and what difference do you want to make in the world? How has GEAR UP IV helped you with your goals?
  3. Considering your lifetime goals, discuss experiences you are proud of and how your current and future academic and extra-curricular activities might help you achieve your goals. How has GEAR UP IV contributed towards meeting your goals?

Congratulations to the following winners!!!

Are you ready to LIVE IT!???

LIVEIT

1st. Place

Trip to San Francisco, CA to participate in the 2015 NCCEP/GEAR UP Youth Leadership Congress on July 18-23, 2015 (10 Students).

1st. Place Table
District High School Name Student Name
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Angelica Garza
Eagle Pass ISD
Eagle Pass High School Daniel Garcia
Jim Hogg ISD Hebbronville High School Olivia Garcia
La Joya ISD Juarez-Lincoln High School  Melanie Gomez
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Angel Guerrero
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Jaime Rivera
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Melissa Garcia
United ISD United High School Daniel King
United ISD United High School Iliana Cantu
United ISD United South High School Martha Espinoza

2nd. Place

Ivy League Tour : Harvard University, MIT, Brown University, Yale University, Princeton University among others on August 9-14, 2015 (30 Students).

2nd. Place Table
District High School Name Student Name
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Andrea Osuna
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Ariana Contreras
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Cleotilde Padilla
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Esmeralda Garza
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Francisco Garcia
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Maria Dariela Sanchez
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Michelle Lucille Aguilar
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Nataly Sanchez
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Nayeli Longoria
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Xitlalli Cervantes
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Janell Garza
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Sergio Martinez
Freer ISD Freer High School Makayla Cantu
La Joya ISD Jimmy Carter Early College High School Alissen Danisse Moreno
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Ashley Marie Romero
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Brianna Viveros
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Jullisa Gomez
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Kayhla Joann Bautista
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Vicente Sanchez
La Joya ISD Thelma R. Salinas STEM Early College HS Guadalupe Lucero Castillo
Laredo ISD Laredo Early College High School Paloma Quiroga
Laredo ISD Martin High School Donna L Gonzalez
Laredo ISD Martin High School Jokabeth Castaneda
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Cassandra Victoria Ruiz
United ISD United High School Dante Angel Briones
United ISD
United High School
Jorge Enrique Lopez
United ISD
United South High School
Brisa Gutierrez
United ISD
United South High School
Elizabeth Rodriguez
United ISD
United South High School
Jesus Mendoza
Webb CISD
Bruni High School
Marco Antonio Perez

 

3rd. Place

Out of State Tour - UT, Baylor, University of Oklahoma, University of Tulsa, University of Arkansas (Texas, Arkansas and Oklahoma Tour) on August 3-6, 2015 (70 Students).

3rd. Place Table
District High School Name  Student Name
Benavides Benavides Secondary School Erestina Vela
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Juan Gildardo Mata
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Kasandra Esparza
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Laura Novel
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Rocio Elida Elizondo
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Sydney Gloria
Eagle Pass ISD C. C. Winn High School Victor De La Garza
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Abigail Ruiz
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Alejandra Rueda
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Fernanda Gonzalez
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Hirom Alarcon
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Lizette Cabello
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Rolando Gonzalez
Eagle Pass ISD Eagle Pass High School Thery Cardenas
Freer ISD Freer High School Chelsea Medina
Freer ISD Freer High School Emory Flores
Freer ISD Freer High School Jordan Cantu
Freer ISD Freer High School Krishna Patel
Freer ISD Freer High School Perla Reyes
Freer ISD Freer High School Sara Alaniz
Freer ISD Freer High School Xaverya Dominguez
Jim Hogg ISD Hebbronville High School Lily Victoria Montemayor
La Joya ISD Jimmy Carter Early College High School Emily Edith Torres
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Aaron Michael Zambrano
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Abigail Salazar
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Adrian Lopez
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Alexis Reina Jimenez
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Andrew Puente
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Brenda Lee Ramos
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Carolina Naely Gonzalez
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Claudessa Aylinee Bazaldua
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Dilan Adolfo Guerrero
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Eliseo Rodriguez
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Jaclyn Nicole Noyola
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Jannel Miliany Alaniz
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Jose Antonio Nanez
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Juan Alberto Alvarado
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Juan Jose Castro
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Karen Cande Rios
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Nathaniel Baldemar Torres
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Omar Isai Gonzalez
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Priscilla Hilario
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Rogelio E Garza
La Joya ISD Palmview High School Sarahi Zavla
Laredo ISD Dr. Leo G. Cigarroa High School Karina Daniela Rojo
Laredo ISD J.W. Nixon High School Andres Ivan Lopez
Laredo ISD J.W. Nixon High School Deborah Teresa Galvan
Laredo ISD J.W. Nixon High School Hailey Marie Chagolla
Laredo ISD J.W. Nixon High School Monika Alejandra Rodriguez
Laredo ISD J.W. Nixon High School Ozziel Cardenas
Laredo ISD Martin High School Diana Laura Parra
Pearsall ISD Pearsall High school Bernadette Rendon Guerra
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Amanda Hope Zepeda
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Guillermo Andres Escobar
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Joo An Rim Kim
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Kevon Pascua Afraee Karahroodi
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Pola Hannan Kuri
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Rebecca Alicia Martinez
United ISD J.B. Alexander High School Vanesa Puente
United ISD United High School Austin Tres Aleman
United ISD United High School Chelsea Marie Cantu
United ISD United High School Eddie Ramos
United ISD United High School Jacklyn Marie Reyna
United ISD United High School Leslie Michelle De Leon
United ISD United High School Marcela Lynn Sager
United ISD United High School Vanessa Aileen Valle
United ISD United South High School Adriana Marquez
United ISD United South High School Andrea Miranda
United ISD United South High School Jenniffer Valdez
Webb CISD Bruni High School Kassandra Inocencio
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Group Picture by School

CCWInn

Eagle Pass ISD - CC Winn High School

EPHS

Eagle Pass ISD - Eagle Pass High School

FreerHS

Freer ISD - Freer High School

Hebb

Bruni HS - Benavides HS - Hebbronville HS

Jimmy

La Joya ISD - Jimmy Carter ECHS

Lincoln

La Joya ISD - Juarez-Lincoln HS and Thelma Salinas STEM ECHS

Palmview

La Joya ISD - Palmview High School

Martin

Laredo ISD - Martin High School

Nixon

Laredo ISD - Nixon High School

Alexander

United ISD - Alexander High School

United

United ISD - United High School

UnitedSouth

United ISD - United South High School

The winning essays were selected by TAMIU administrators and instructors. Special thank you to our judges: Dr. Conchita Hichey, Dean of the Office of University College; Virginia Watkins, Instructor; Lilia Patricia Cantu, Instructor; Ann Hoey, Instructor; and Monica Thorpe, Instructor.


Essay Contest Details: REGISTRATION FOR THE 2015 ESSAY COMPETITION IS NOW CLOSED.

THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING!!!

The Deadline for 2015 will be 11:59 PM Central Standard Time, May 3, 2015

WRITEIT

ALL ESSAYS SHOULD SPECIFICALLY ADDRESS ONE OF THE FOLLOWING TOPICS:

  1. Describe a circumstance, obstacle or conflict in your life, and the skills and resources you used to resolve it. Were you successful? What lessons did you learn from this experience? How has GEAR UP IV helped you with your goals?
  2. What are Three Major ways you have contributed to your community where you have shown leadership or initiative and what difference do you want to make in the world? How has GEAR UP IV helped you with your goals?
  3. Considering your lifetime goals, discuss experiences you are proud of and how your current and future academic and extra-curricular activities might help you achieve your goals. How has GEAR UP IV contributed towards meeting your goals?

GEARIT

RULES AND GUIDELINES:

  1. Essay should be 1000-1500 words in length.
  2. Essay must be submitted between April 15, 2015 and 11:59 PM Central Standard Time, May 3, 2015.
  3. Submit your Essay using the following link: Essay_Competition. Only the first 500 essays will be considered. Registration is now closed!
  4. All essays must be the original work of the student whose name is listed on the submission form. Plagiarism will result in immediate disqualification. All sources, including articles you have written, must be cited.
  5. Attach a copy of your original work in English on the designated topic, which should include a comprehensive list of sources consulted. You must write on one of the topics provided; essays on other topics will not be accepted. Please title your essay.
  6. Do not place your name or your school's name on any of the pages of the essay. Only the registration form should include this information.
  7. Essays MUST be submitted in Microsoft Word (.doc or .docx) format. Essays submitted in any other format will not be considered.
  8. Your essay will be disqualified if it does not meet the requirements or is submitted after the submission date of 11:59 PM Central Standard Time, May 3, 2015.
  9. Student must be a current TAMIU GEAR UP IV student (10th Grade) and must have proper documentation to travel within the U.S.
  10. You will be notified if you are the winner in May or June 2015. The names of winners will be posted on GEAR UP IV Social Media website and at the School's GEAR UP IV Office.
  11. Submission of essays constitutes permission for TAMIU GEAR UP IV program to post, reproduce and/or print winning essays on different media, including social media.
  12. Your essay will become the property of the TAMIU GEAR UP IV Program once it is submitted, and will not be returned.
  13. The decisions of the judges are final. See Essay Rubric.
  14. Student must participate in a PSAT Boot Camp during Summer of 2015 and/or during Academic Year 2015-2016 at their school when available.

THANK YOU FOR YOUR ESSAY SUBMISSION AND GOOD LUCK!


LIVEIT

PRIZES

1st. Place
Trip to San Francisco, CA to participate in the 2015 NCCEP/GEAR UP Youth Leadership Congress on July 18-23, 2015 (10 Students).

2nd. Place
Ivy League Tour : Harvard University, MIT, Brown University, Yale University, Princeton University among others on August 9-14, 2015 (30 Students).

3rd. Place
Out of State Tour - UT, Baylor, University of Oklahoma, University of Tulsa, University of Arkansas (Texas, Arkansas and Oklahoma Tour) on August 3-6, 2015 (100 Students).

2015 ESSAY COMPETITION RUBRIC

  1. ESSAY (60 PTS). See Essay Rubric.
  2. PSAT Scores (20 PTS)
  3. ACT Scores (10 PTS)
  4. Qannection usage (5 PTS) - Minimum 2hr in 2015 Spring Semester.
  5. Followed Guidelines (5 PTS).

Total Possible Points: 100 PTS.

Essay Rubric
  12 9 6 3
Development Ideas presented in the essay are well-developed but not wordy; analysis is clearly and fully supported; cogent examples are provided; the essay leaves no questions unintentionally unanswered Most analysis and ideas are satisfactorily developed. Examples are usually provided where appropriate. Development is inconsistent; some ideas are left unaddressed. Little analysis, few examples provided Development is thin and spotty. Ideas are not supported by analysis or examples
Organization The essay is thoughtfully and effectively organized; its organization may or may not be of a recognizable “standard” but it works to effect the purpose of the essay While the essay is clearly, even carefully organized, its structure may not be the most effective presentation of the material The essay has a recognizable, perhaps formulaic, organization, but the structure bears no obvious relationship to the purpose of the essay The essay is not clearly organized.
Je ne sais quoi This essay made me say “Wow” The essay made me say “pretty cool” The essay made me say “okay” The essay made me say “Boring”
Style The essay exhibits a perhaps distinctive written style whose diction and tone are clearly suited to the purpose of the essay. The voice is academically or professionally appropriate, but not necessarily tailored to the essay. Diction and tone are unsophisticated and inappropriate. “The first reason is…”
Mechanics While it may not be mechanically perfect, the essay contains no distracting mechanical errors The essay contains a few distracting mechanical errors (in usage, spelling, punctuation, etc.) The essay has several distracting errors that interfere in the communication of ideas The paper is riddled with errors that impede understanding

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